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minus-squareEch@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·6 hours ago“They were coming.” would be a much better final line.
minus-squareBronzebeard@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·5 hours agoMostly because it would be a full sentence unlike whatever we got in the OP
“They were coming.” would be a much better final line.
Mostly because it would be a full sentence unlike whatever we got in the OP